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Empty Canvas
Contributed by
brianimal
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Saturday, 5th February 2011 @ 03:07:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Blank page. .........Undesigned.
The empty canvas of the mind.
Pen to paper ............where to go?
Thoughts gain momentum, begin to grow.
A scratch, a draft, the edit inside
to judge, manipulate, with freelance pride
Loss and Love? Newfound affection?
This blank page has found direction.
But the canvas is painted. The time has come.
Must start it fresh, this one is done.
......Blank page
......Somewhat designed.
Copyright ©
brianimal
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2011-02-05 15:07:32]
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Re: Empty Canvas
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by huwbeauty on
Saturday, 5th February 2011 @ 03:25:13 PM AEST
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| Good write,nice depiction of a writing process. |
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Re: Empty Canvas
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 5th February 2011 @ 09:07:57 PM AEST
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From the easy flow to the smooth rhyme scheme, I really love the way you wrote this. Great poem!
Thank you for sharing.
Tim
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