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said the wrong thing too many times
Contributed by
poeticjestix
on
Saturday, 5th February 2011 @ 02:36:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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built with carefree simplicity
in a moment all is lost
the key, it turns to dust.
Copyright ©
poeticjestix
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2011-02-05 02:36:54] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: said the wrong thing too many times
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 6th February 2011 @ 03:36:37 AM AEST (User
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I love Haiku and the intensity of meaning that can be concentrated into its lines.
You've done it brilliantly here.
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