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drown in it
Contributed by
ming
on
Friday, 4th February 2011 @ 09:31:24 AM in AEST
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abstract
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blank-faced angels hang about
with myth and meaning
whispering hollow script
as her words hang up
like pieces of wet paper
gagging the throat
till the push as ink
memories that hang
in the unconscious
like sleeping bats
once hanging
twist and break
shadows and motes
of spinning dust
trying to 'end this'
poem
hang it
up.
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ming
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2011-02-04 09:31:24]
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Re: drown in it
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by Voyager on
Friday, 4th February 2011 @ 12:07:07 PM AEST
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"with myth and meaning
whispering hollow script"
Excellent lines! You seem well in touch with your subconscient recesses....... |
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Re: drown in it
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by cashfan1 on
Friday, 4th February 2011 @ 01:27:33 PM AEST
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| Splendid writing. I love this piece. Very talented, thanks for sharing. |
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