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Total Let Down
Contributed by
InfinitePoet
on
Thursday, 3rd February 2011 @ 10:52:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
sarcasticpoetry
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Total Let Down
One look & my skin begins to
Crawl..
By your
Transparency,
I've never been so
Appalled...
The curtain of Shame
is about to Fall..
I want A front row seat
to watch you Squirm
& Lie your way
through it all...
Look Around!!!
You must be so Blind,
Trying to Stand tall
Stuttering Lies,
spinning room,
better grab some Wall,
and grow A set of Balls!!
I'm No Longer,
on 'Display' upon
your wall of undeniable,
Filth, Like A tortured,
humiliated, sexually,
Abused,
Doom~Desired,
Deadly Doll!!!!!
Copyright ©
InfinitePoet
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2011-02-03 22:52:54]
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Re: Total Let Down
(User Rating: 1 )
by huwbeauty on
Thursday, 24th March 2011 @ 06:56:05 AM AEST
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| I really like your style and this reminds me of my ex so much it's uncanny. |
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Re: Total Let Down
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by ammar on
Wednesday, 19th October 2011 @ 10:38:56 AM AEST
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I love the way you carry the 'all' rhymes throughout the poem. This is something the reader doesn't expect while reading the first stanza and so is caught by surprise. Your anger is justified! A very fine write.
Ammar |
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