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drowned world
Contributed by
stoic_squirm
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Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 04:35:00 PM in AEST
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i feel like i came from the bottom of the sea,
where i had to touch its ground.
i had to reach them before its too late,
but i came late afterall.
that caught my breath in the middle of my chest.
it was the deepest i have ever been, and it wasnt easy.
there, i saw my destiny, and everyone's destiny.
i took a handful sand hoping to bring them to the surface of the earth.
but it went off my hand as i upsurge from the sea.
when i came back, i thought everything was a nightmare.
i look at my hand gripping still,
holding still to the mystery of the sea ...
there was none that i brought to learn from.
it only became a sake of experience.
so when i get back and had my air, i lit up a cigar,
and walk on to the sand i made of cigar butts.
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Re: drowned world
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by shelby on
Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 01:08:29 AM AEST
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meloncholy........ such a touching write. Sorry for your loss. Hug for you.
Michelle |
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Re: drowned world
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 11:45:14 AM AEST
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| a very most moving write.. hugs nessa |
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