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Trapped.
Contributed by
0o_Jelly_Bean_o0
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Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 03:35:00 PM in AEST
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I didn't want to go,
I needed to come back,
I didn't know what to do,
I felt so god damned trapped.
One thing led to another,
And once again I feared,
Being so far away from them,
I needed them to be near.
I felt so blind
To things that only I can see,
God why wont u tell,
What is wrong with me.
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0o_Jelly_Bean_o0
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2003-04-23 15:35:00]
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Re: Trapped.
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 07:07:44 PM AEST
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| good poem! but i bet u can add more right? lol sorri.. its a good start |
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Re: Trapped.
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 07:07:54 PM AEST
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| good poem! but i bet u can add more right? lol sorri.. its a good start |
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Re: Trapped.
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 07:07:56 PM AEST
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| good poem! but i bet u can add more right? lol sorri.. its a good start |
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Re: Trapped.
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 07:07:59 PM AEST
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| good poem! but i bet u can add more right? lol sorri.. its a good start |
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Re: Trapped.
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by vydana on
Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 10:08:03 PM AEST
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| Good poem :) Hope you don't feel trapped anymore :) |
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Re: Trapped.
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by shelby on
Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 01:14:16 AM AEST
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you did a great job on thsi poem.Feeling trapped is the worst!! If you still feel trapped let me know I'll come help break you out!!
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Re: Trapped.
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by Apartment213 on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 01:42:09 AM AEST
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| i like it good poem...what else is there to say it was great |
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