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I Lost. Again
Contributed by
CommasCanSeperate
on
Monday, 31st January 2011 @ 11:56:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Maybe I am pathetic for missing you both.
But I'm not cold to it. And I sorry if they forgot about me, I'm sorry people cant remember how good they were, but I do. Everybody had badness somewhere no matter how hidden.
I’ll never pretend it was all sweetness and light
I’ll never pretend that you were not to an acquired taste
And how you seemed to like people, yet not others
Could sometimes be classed a disgrace
But somehow you both took a liking to me
Somehow you saw that inside I was genuine, maybe kind
Well one of a kind at least.
I took to you bot
And your strange little quirks
Her bless
And the other half's bad words
Every second word I’d have to say, from sue
Left little to be desired
And the trousers you both wore
Were some sort of crazy yet fun attire
But they were all part of you both
And they each made up the energy of the place
You, both of you, never judged me
By the looks upon my face
There seemed to be something below
Some energy aura you could both see and feel
And when I was around you, on these fabulous days
it would certainly reveal
She knew what I really was like
never the good little Christian girl
So I let her in and I trusted her words
In she fitted to my world
Each word of advice
I’m never going to forget
I took a loving to this couple
From the day that we met
Tears will fall for the memories I miss
tears will fall for the yard I’ve lost
But I guess things happen for a reason
yet there always seems to be a cost
That day I found out the news
There’s little I can remember about it
I just crumbled into a mound of depression
And open wide my hear did rip
It shattered into fragments
I calmly walked to my room focussed on that only
and I broke down there
Under the covers became so homely
At the yard that night
it was an empty abandoned mess
Everybody was ******** about you both
I couldn’t care less…
I was transfixed on my job
I was riding and mucking out
But it was all just a cover up
That was without a doubt
I didn’t know if you’d still want me, still do.
I guess I’ll never know
I just hope, pray you won’t forget me
And how much I love you so.
<3
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Re: I Lost. Again
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by Savannah1085 on
Monday, 31st January 2011 @ 02:19:06 PM AEST
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