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a perfect place
Contributed by
DanielleMarie
on
Sunday, 30th January 2011 @ 09:09:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I would like to steer myself in another direction.
In a world where pain is a deep dark mystery
you only hear of in books and stories. A place
where there are no deceptions and everything
is just what it seems to be. Temptations will
never pull you in and turn your soul black.
There is only white and pureness and lies
do not take over because there is no such
thing as a lie. A sanctuary where the lions
prowl and never bite the hand that feeds.
People smile at you with warm embraces.
They do not eye you down green with envy.
Lovers never deny you and forever you get
what you give, not just what you want.
Summer is the only season and winter
in unheard of here. Flower always bloom
and roses never die they live forever water
or none.
Copyright ©
DanielleMarie
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2011-01-30 21:09:39]
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Re: a perfect place
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by CommasCanSeperate on
Monday, 31st January 2011 @ 12:05:33 PM AEST
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Aww lovely written x
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Re: a perfect place
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by Savannah1085 on
Monday, 31st January 2011 @ 02:16:57 PM AEST
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| wow, this is a pretty good poem! :) |
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Re: a perfect place
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by Mando on
Saturday, 12th March 2011 @ 04:24:32 AM AEST
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| Very good sounds like a perfect place |
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