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Playing the blame game.
Contributed by
Disasterology
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Friday, 28th January 2011 @ 12:09:23 PM in AEST
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Desperate minds, call for desperate measures.
It's a shame that we're not together. I'd love to prove
to you that there's no such thing as forever.
I don't want to here you talk, you're presence alone
is taunting my thoughts. You're so fragile and ashamed,
i hope you know that later we're playing the blame game.
I've got a million and two things to pin on you. All you've got
to say is that i'm through. It's a war between head and heart,
go with the one that says we should be apart. No time for arguing,
just pack your bags and leave. I'll light a match and burn it all,
making everything else in the world look dull.
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Disasterology
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2011-01-28 12:09:23]
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Re: Playing the blame game.
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by duff on
Friday, 28th January 2011 @ 02:41:33 PM AEST
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You can really feel the hurt and anger in your words and its great to feel something when you are reading ones writing and you can for sure here. There are some great lines that make this shine and overall its a well written poem
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Re: Playing the blame game.
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by wallerdude on
Monday, 31st January 2011 @ 07:22:55 AM AEST
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| i like ur emotion behind this, i always seem to express my anger/hate like this. good job |
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