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Suicidal
Contributed by
TheSpiritx
on
Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 12:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I killed myself today,
But I didn’t die.
Not completely.
I ended my life today,
But I am still alive
Inside.
I threw myself away,
So why am I still here
With this pain?
This life
Of trouble
Burdens me,
And yet
I keep
Suffering.
I killed myself today,
But I didn’t die.
Why?
I ended my life today,
But I am still alive
Why?
I threw myself away,
But I haven’t justified
Why I’d want to die.
Although
I am
Dead,
I take
A breath
And live.
I killed myself today,
But God
Let me go on.
This is why
I am
Alive.
Copyright ©
TheSpiritx
... [
2003-04-23 12:05:00]
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Re: Suicidal
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by wyrd_faerie on
Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 02:31:39 PM AEST
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| it's always worth it...whenever it feels like it isn't, and when it feels like there's no point...there always is, if only to write more poetry like this...very good... |
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Re: Suicidal
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by LadyDama on
Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 08:03:30 AM AEST
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| ah, and i know another reason... so we can read your insightful thoughts... so good to see you posting again... you were the first person to comment and welcome me to YPDC and i frequently look to see if you have put up new work... here it is and it was worth the wait... blessings... |
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Re: Suicidal
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by Wilder on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 05:42:52 PM AEST
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One of those "short and to the point" poems. I liked it.
~ Wilder ~ |
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Re: Suicidal
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by AngryPrincess on
Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 10:52:40 PM AEST
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wow Clint!!! its so full of emotion and just pure pain...it definitely captured the struggle, however sad it may be...great write..
Lindsey |
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Re: Suicidal
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by Destiny on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 02:01:41 PM AEST
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| Hey, you were the first person to comment on one of my poems when I joined this site back in Febuary and I never said thnx so I figured I'd say it now. You're an incredible writer and I loved this poem. |
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Re: Suicidal
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by Nightingale on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 05:16:15 AM AEST
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| very beautiful poem... |
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Re: Suicidal
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by Saira on
Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 09:59:33 AM AEST
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Wow! This is an absolutely a great write...seems more like a dark song to me. Two thumbs up!! =o)
Stay well!
Saira |
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