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Wondering
Contributed by
longago
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Wednesday, 26th January 2011 @ 04:30:39 PM in AEST
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hbadday
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so tell me how it feels to be "the one"
the girl who's always right, the light, "the sun"
that person who can have you at hello?
just look at me, its clear id never know
i cannot tell you how im always wrong
intentions, mostly good just wont last long
i try so hard, i beg i wish i plead
but always end up hurting those i need
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Re: Wondering
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by deusdeira on
Wednesday, 26th January 2011 @ 06:24:55 PM AEST
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| Stop trying so hard. That's what the problem is. Let them be them, and you be you, and if it doesn't work out, don't force it. That is the way successful relationships work. Enjoying life outside the other person. |
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Re: Wondering
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by Banjosandwitch on
Thursday, 27th January 2011 @ 06:10:35 AM AEST
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| punktuation please but iiiiii like |
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Re: Wondering
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by kleetas on
Thursday, 27th January 2011 @ 05:03:43 PM AEST
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| eight lines can say so much..keep up writing , don't loose the touch..you'll look back and laff bout now..that's the beauty of learning how! |
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