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Gorgeous,enormous.
Contributed by
huwbeauty
on
Wednesday, 26th January 2011 @ 04:05:08 PM in AEST
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I'm gorgeous,
I'm enormous,
And oh so very talented,
I'll make you squeal,
And make you reel,
And wonder how I manage it,
I am your dream,
Your ecstatic scream,
All you ever wanted,
You writhe and contort,
With all I've brought,
I will not be sedated,
Your spine an arch,
I know this march,
Has very nearly ended,
So I know I must,
With one last thrust,
'cause I've become distended,
You close your eyes,
Let out a sigh,
I say goodbye,
Now 'our souls have blended'.
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2011-01-26 16:05:08]
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Re: Gorgeous,enormous.
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by holderofthestone on
Thursday, 27th January 2011 @ 07:17:50 AM AEST
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| Great word usage, I really like the flow this has. Great write |
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Re: Gorgeous,enormous.
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by cashfan1 on
Saturday, 29th January 2011 @ 02:57:55 AM AEST
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| Another brilliant write from a poet fast becoming one of the best on this site. I love the flow, smooth and easy. Well done. |
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