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Inner Strength
Contributed by
allie_07
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Tuesday, 25th January 2011 @ 07:29:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Memories from your past;
the bad seem to be forgotten at last.
No matter how hard you try, they are still a part of you,
but it's never too late to be brand new.
Just find your strength within,
and remember.. who you are is not what you've been.
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Re: Inner Strength
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by DrcGaimer on
Tuesday, 25th January 2011 @ 08:25:42 PM AEST
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| I like this! Short, but carries a powerful message. What great truth rings out in the final line, "who you are is not what you've been." Excellent! |
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Re: Inner Strength
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by Survivor on
Friday, 2nd August 2013 @ 02:15:17 PM AEST
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| This poem is absolutely amazing. The stanza saying “no matter how hard you try, they are still a part of you, but it's never too late to be brand new” is one of the best metaphors I seen which had to consist of a rhyming pattern. Great job! |
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