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Eternal Sleep
Contributed by
Poetic_Ramblings
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Tuesday, 25th January 2011 @ 01:25:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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A single drop of loneliness
Trickles down from dormant rest
To flow through fields of flowers-bare
And linger in the midnight air
To slide between each tiny crack
And fill what we’ve been left to lack
To roll past isle, hill, and yonder
And countless miles more to wander
To slither over frozen land
And crumble in the rocky sand
To fall down under, sit and seep
And rest there in eternal sleep
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Re: Eternal Sleep
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by Voyager on
Tuesday, 25th January 2011 @ 02:29:26 PM AEST
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| Very interesting write. The first two lines are very nice.... |
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Re: Eternal Sleep
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by huwbeauty on
Tuesday, 25th January 2011 @ 03:05:10 PM AEST
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| Nice write,good flow and great imagery. |
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