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Sutures Will Suit Her
Contributed by
AStepFromTheEdge
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Tuesday, 25th January 2011 @ 12:56:17 PM in AEST
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My rabi said son your catholic and your boring its only Sunday morning take a weeks worth to rest watch hamlit proposes to juiliet romoe where's your poison kiss. An apple with a tastful twist. Now dance ceaser dance in the light of new romance were heading out tomorrow on time we only borrow with no intention to return. Heartlessly harmonise the violin with the blind and see the future from yesterday.
Sun burns black with only good intent. Cancer kills the virus a death inside us. Souls with no place to go. Homes where they brought us raised us and taught us how love is only for the boring. Its still only Sunday morning. And the weak will need the rest. And we tried our best. Still the point we have to miss. Over look the cure that's killing us. Surgan with a distate for blood. Vomit in the cut. Sutures will suit her. Death is all we can trust.
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Re: Sutures Will Suit Her
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by deusdeira on
Tuesday, 25th January 2011 @ 01:19:25 PM AEST
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| A good poem, may I suggest stanzas tho. It makes it easier to read. |
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Re: Sutures Will Suit Her
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by huwbeauty on
Tuesday, 25th January 2011 @ 03:18:44 PM AEST
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| I agree with the previous comment,needs structuring a bit better,other than that it's a really good write. |
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