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she said goodnight
Contributed by
ming
on
Tuesday, 25th January 2011 @ 08:52:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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drinking alone
moon a smokey
disk
walking home
with head-float
hatching snakes
her heart inside
a zero
with a turned back
dragging shadows
coveting solitude
half block away.
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ming
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2011-01-25 08:52:38]
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Re: she said goodnight
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by DrcGaimer on
Tuesday, 25th January 2011 @ 08:51:20 PM AEST
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| This is pretty deep. She drank alone, heads home alone, yet longs for the loneliness of home. You really don't know whether to applaud her or feel sorry for her. |
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Re: she said goodnight
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by duff on
Friday, 28th January 2011 @ 02:33:39 PM AEST
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This is very intricate and what a read to spark the creativity. Mysterious and captivating imagery throughout that is a joy to follow along with. A unique write my friend. Great job
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Re: she said goodnight
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by cashfan1 on
Saturday, 29th January 2011 @ 03:00:45 AM AEST
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| Superb imagery throughout, this is deep and stunningly written. Very well done. |
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Re: she said goodnight
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 6th February 2011 @ 10:29:55 PM AEST
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Hmmm...interesting. I like the images you stir up with this one and we do all need our solitude. I am, at times, happy in my solitude.
I also went somewhere else with this one though... whatever, whatever !!! is going on in "her" mind she is obviously & absolutely entitled to. It is her own, but walking alone at night? That could cause one to worry about her. Yep, I went there too.
Thanks,
Tim |
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Re: she said goodnight
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by FlintHunter on
Monday, 5th September 2011 @ 07:47:51 AM AEST
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Dear ming,
This poem froze me after reading it once. After reading it twice my eyes stared straight ahead and didn't move. An unquestionable masterpiece. A poem that brings you There -- whether you ask to go or not. Nothing short of brilliant. -- flinthunter |
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