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Corpse Ablaze

Contributed by sicknivesevered on Tuesday, 25th January 2011 @ 01:59:19 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

LET'S BLOW ALL THEIR ***** MINDS
I CAN SEE IT ALL WORK WITH TIME
BELIEVE AND WE'LL BE FINE
ROCK OUT, ENHANCE OUR LIVES

YEAH
I SWORE I'D SEE THAT...
I ALWAYS KNEW I'D SEE THAT DAY

BUT I WAS WRONG
YOUR PRESENCE GONE
DISCONNECT
WRETCHED REFLECTIONS
all that I see
loss haunting me

NOW I KNOW IT WAS A ***** FARCE
DID YOU JUST LIE
FOR NO OUTCRY?
(OUR RUIN BEHIND YOUR EYES)
DEAD TO ME BUT LONG SINCE DYING
*****

GUESS YOU JUST HATE COMMITMENT
COMPOSED OF SELF-DISCIPLINE
(I AM SCREAMING)
I'M SCREAMING
YOUR EULOGY FOR ME
I hoped so long this would not be
begrudge the ENDING

so now we're here
and I'm living
my worst fear

I can't believe
that you thew it away without even trying

I can't even reminisce
all I feel is ANGUISH

all for nothing
what do I have left but your memory?
devotion
emotion
you did receive
but it wasn't returned
so now I must burn
you out of me

{DVL}
1/25/2011

Copyright © sicknivesevered ... [ 2011-01-25 01:59:19]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Corpse Ablaze (User Rating: 1 )
by huwbeauty on Tuesday, 25th January 2011 @ 06:55:04 AM AEST
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Pretty good this, can just imagine some heavy guitar going quite well with it.
It's a good poem in it's own right though.Not sure about the first verse, it seems out of place with the rest of the write...could be just me?

Mat.

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