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Bliss Palace
Contributed by
Contralogicus
on
Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 09:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Can’t you feel the flowing mellow breeze?
Navigating through the unfolded trees,
Embracing you tightly, giving you a kiss,
Transporting you into a palace of bliss.
The silence echoes off of the ivory walls,
Blinding lights slowly fill the virgin halls,
Thirsty for the truth, you wonder lost,
Turn on your mind, contemplate the cost,
At which you go about your daily life,
Can’t be bothered by other people’s strife?
Redeem yourself and you will be aware,
Suddenly you’ll be filling up with care.
Copyright ©
Contralogicus
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2003-04-23 09:05:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Bliss Palace
(User Rating: 1 ) by wordsy on
Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 09:48:26 AM AEST (User
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A very nice read.
wordsy. |
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Re: Bliss Palace
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ilhar on
Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 01:26:21 PM AEST (User
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beautifully flowing words
Shari |
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