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Goodbye
Contributed by
beutifuldreamer84
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Saturday, 22nd January 2011 @ 06:52:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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A burning in my heart a burning in my soul.
Emotions erratic, I am losing control.
Chest is heavy it becomes hard to breath.
Eyes wide open but can not see.
Pulse and mind are racing.
Feet are restless continually pacing.
Answers to questions evading the brain.
Starting to wonder if one is still sane.
Take deep breaths but it does not help.
The love once had is no longer felt.
You need to go and walk out that door.
Feet do not move they stay planted to the floor.
The choice is not a hard one to make.
More afraid of whom you might hurt in your quake.
You know this isn’t your life or how it is suppose to be.
You know it would be best just to leave.
Think about it but don’t waste much time.
You can’t go on pretending that you are fine.
The answer is right in front of you.
Open your eyes and see the truth.
Feelings once felt for that someone are no longer.
Feelings of love have been replaced with resentment which is much stronger.
Working things out is no longer an option.
There is no fix it potion.
You step over the thresh hold and don’t look behind.
This is it this is goodbye.
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Re: Goodbye
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by RachelSixx on
Sunday, 23rd January 2011 @ 12:08:54 PM AEST
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| very well written, i like it. |
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Re: Goodbye
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by beutifuldreamer84 on
Sunday, 23rd January 2011 @ 12:55:15 PM AEST
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| One of my better poems that I like cause you can kind of picture someone getting ready to walk away.... |
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