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Missing You
Contributed by
Shaqs_Girl96
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Saturday, 22nd January 2011 @ 11:50:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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-The day you left me, I fell to my feet
-Now my heart is stuck in a block of concrete
-Trying it’s hardest to break right threw
-But it can’t, because I am missing you
-Three weeks later, I have heard many things
-Pick up your phone, do you hear it Ring, Ring, Ring
-Seeing you is what keeps my heart running
-Oh my goodness boy you are so stunning
-Bighead is what you use to call me I know you remember
-I can’t believe you dumped me, in late December.
-Sad, mad, and hurt is how I feel
-Come on, I’m your ex now let’s be for real
-I’ll never forget your smile
-Last kiss or last touch
-I’ll take it to my grave
-For the pain is far too much
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Shaqs_Girl96
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2011-01-22 11:50:43]
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Re: Missing You
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by poeticjestix on
Saturday, 22nd January 2011 @ 03:20:52 PM AEST
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| i feel your pain. We've all been there resting on or laurels and all that, thinking things are set in stone. Can be a bit of a shock when you find out otherwise! |
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Re: Missing You
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by bluegirl on
Sunday, 23rd January 2011 @ 01:33:33 AM AEST
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I feel so sorry for you. I hope you find another.
This poem is very touching and I can feel the pain you are experiencing as I read every word. This was written very well, good job :) |
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Re: Missing You
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by hmong_dude on
Tuesday, 1st February 2011 @ 04:18:32 AM AEST
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| Nice...! But don't let it bring u down... The next one is always better than the last!!! |
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