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we sat in silence
Contributed by
DanielleMarie
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Friday, 21st January 2011 @ 11:07:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I sat in silence like a ghost.
The house slowly melted into
darkness, making me feel like
a stranger in my own world, a
stranger to myself. I looked outside
the windows and all I saw was grey
and blue, grey and blue. I build up the
strength to feed my dog. I sit at that kitchen
table letting the sun set dictate my life.
Tick tock tick tock and it's gone the day
is done. He sat on the couch like a zombie
we had nothing to say for ourselves. His addiction
is my sickness, his sickness is my down fall.
Copyright ©
DanielleMarie
... [
2011-01-21 23:07:36]
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Re: we sat in silence
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by Dirkj on
Friday, 21st January 2011 @ 11:45:25 PM AEST
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| wow, it's a very sad poem, but i like the you wrote it, well done |
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Re: we sat in silence
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by CommasCanSeperate on
Saturday, 22nd January 2011 @ 05:08:33 AM AEST
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Thats dead depressing woah.. :(
Very beautifully wrote though x x |
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Re: we sat in silence
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by longago on
Sunday, 23rd January 2011 @ 05:33:20 AM AEST
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| nice |
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