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Such A Fragile Rock.
Contributed by
CommasCanSeperate
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Thursday, 20th January 2011 @ 12:24:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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We all struggle at times in our lives. Yesterday was one for the digestive but he's stronger than that! x
Today you rushed out
You were angry and you were sad
and things that’s happened
They’ve made you feel bad
And I don’t like you angry
and I don’t like you in pain
Because its me it happens to me
again and again
not you, nobody can hurt you
Your too good, and fragile
So I’ll stand with you, hold you within my arms
for a little while
Not that it does much good though
As I follow you out
Your dying to punch something, someone
To scream, cry, shout.
You talk to me with harsh words
And I listen close
and I hold you tightly
And I won’t let go of you
You apologize to me
for I guess trying to shut me out
But I was always going to follow you
there was never any doubt
Your shaking like a leaf
And your hearts beating too fast
But at least you’re not being fake
and you don’t carry a mask
You let your feelings out
and your honest and straight
Your my best friend, my lover
Your my soul mate
and I love you and need you
So I won’t let you down
Even when your being a pain
and won’t wipe away that frown
So I’ll hold you closer, closer yet
And closer still and more
Till you can find that key
And open that door.
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Re: Such A Fragile Rock.
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by holderofthestone on
Thursday, 20th January 2011 @ 01:06:18 PM AEST
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| nice, you sound like a great friend and companion. there is a lot of kindness in the words here. good write. nice flow also :) |
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Re: Such A Fragile Rock.
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by whitt on
Thursday, 20th January 2011 @ 09:00:24 PM AEST
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i truly love this!!! specially the part where you wrote..
"You let your feelings out
and your honest and straight
Your my best friend, my lover
Your my soul mate"
very great read :)
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