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Battered and bruised
Contributed by
huwbeauty
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Thursday, 20th January 2011 @ 07:19:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I see myself,as no one special,
Just another,
Corporeal vessel,
Try as I might,to live my life true,
I seem to end up,
Battered and bruised,
But I won't change,my way of being,
'cause deep inside,
It's peace that I'm feeling,
So I will continue,to do the right thing,
Certain I'll feel,
Life's bitter sting,
Yet safe in the knowledge,I'm still alive,
Enslaved by hope,
Glad that I've tried.
Copyright ©
huwbeauty
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2011-01-20 07:19:23]
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Re: Battered and bruised
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by LandsleyAlexandre on
Thursday, 20th January 2011 @ 08:28:15 AM AEST
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| This is a well written poem....I loved it :) |
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Re: Battered and bruised
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by CommasCanSeperate on
Thursday, 20th January 2011 @ 12:37:28 PM AEST
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| As the other comment says lovely written and put together, has a beautiful amount of emotion throughout! x |
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Re: Battered and bruised
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by cashfan1 on
Friday, 21st January 2011 @ 04:16:02 AM AEST
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| As with all your work, this is deep and beautifully expressed, I do enjoy your work very much. Keep them flowing. |
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Re: Battered and bruised
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by Breezy on
Friday, 21st January 2011 @ 05:05:30 AM AEST
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What a beautifully inspiring piece! And of the
subject , I am intimately acquainted. Hope indeed
finds us, regardless of circumstance, but this is a
healthy and very good thing.
This write, fills the reader with a sense of connection
and fulfillment. In a way that cannot be escaped.
Wonderful sentiments in this, even with the sadness
that lines some of the words.
Fantastic post!!
~ Breezy
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Re: Battered and bruised
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by Ambivalence on
Friday, 21st January 2011 @ 02:02:23 PM AEST
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Doesn't it seem that every time we get hurt (no matter how badly) we still find the strength and hope to continue on? I'm glad you're one that doesn't give up, even though the desired results don't follow through, because there's nothing else left to do but try! I think not giving it a shot is the worst thing that can happen. I actually found this to be quite inspiring, despite your heartfelt, unsettled bitterness. Great write...
take care
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Re: Battered and bruised
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st January 2011 @ 09:43:30 PM AEST
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| Living our lives as we can...only the way we can, doing our best, being ourselves and trying, with hope. Well stated. |
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