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Caught In Dream Country.
Contributed by
liiam6
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Thursday, 20th January 2011 @ 03:44:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Noticing joy in a winters scene,
To busy to realise it once was yours,
Now each passing moment seems only a dream,
In the quest to unlock gates and open doors.
For not what you see but what you seek,
Do the bedsheets unravel at the break of day,
Too blind now to see the rewards you reap,
By just being you in every way.
But in the end will it prove worthwhile?
As you bath in sunlight upon a sandy shore,
Will the once furrowed brow revert to smile?
And the joy that was hidden return once more.
Copyright ©
liiam6
... [
2011-01-20 03:44:08]
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Re: Caught In Dream Country.
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by Brianimal on
Thursday, 20th January 2011 @ 03:47:16 AM AEST
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| Its right under your nose. I like it alot!!! |
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Re: Caught In Dream Country.
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by LandsleyAlexandre on
Thursday, 20th January 2011 @ 08:30:50 AM AEST
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| Interesting poem, the first lines are nicely written :) |
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Re: Caught In Dream Country.
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by cashfan1 on
Friday, 21st January 2011 @ 04:18:07 AM AEST
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| Very well done, this is full of thought and expertly written. Very enjoyable, thanks for posting. |
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