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Struggling

Contributed by huwbeauty on Wednesday, 19th January 2011 @ 01:00:26 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished

Been having trouble living,
Not like before,
Challenges you were giving,
I'm just lying in my bed,
Struggling,
With where I've been led.

Been having trouble grieving,
Not like before,
When you were deceiving,
I'm just lying in my bed,
Struggling,
With all that I have shed.

Been having trouble sleeping,
Not like before,
When I was always weeping,
I'm just lying in my bed,
Struggling,
With thoughts inside my head.

Been having trouble dreaming,
Not like before,
When the chemicals were seeping,
I'm just lying in my bed,
Struggling,
Fighting nightmares instead.

Copyright © huwbeauty ... [ 2011-01-19 01:00:26]
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Re: Struggling (User Rating: 1 )
by cashfan1 on Wednesday, 19th January 2011 @ 04:44:38 AM AEST
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This sent a shiver down my spine. You are a really talented writer, full of depth and strength,
I hope your nightmares go away soon.

Re: Struggling (User Rating: 1 )
by sicknivesevered on Tuesday, 25th January 2011 @ 11:58:37 PM AEST
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Awesome. I like the structure and you pulled it off very well. Get rid of a problem and still ***** up cause it's too deep to just forget. Quite relatable.

And concerning your comment (much appreciated) on my work... yes, you're right. The first verse doesn't fit with the rest but that's because it is my perspective long ago before ***** went awry while the rest serves to express feelings harbored thereafter.

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