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And Thats When....

Contributed by CommasCanSeperate on Tuesday, 18th January 2011 @ 03:10:42 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



It’s when we roll on the trampoline and you tackle me to the ground
it’s when you pin me to the bed and tickle me useless
its when I laugh so hard I cry
it’s when you laugh so hard the tears run down your beautiful cheeks
its when I jump up onto you and you catch me in your arms so strong
its when you hug me and swear you will never let me go
its when you gently touch me sometimes and send shivers all around me
its when you randomly kiss my cheek and I’m happily surprise
its when we just look at each other and smile, just because we are happy
its when you give me that cheeky look and I become suspicious, but I’m still smiling
its when I sit alone and cry because you lied
its when I clutch the blade in the hand and squeeze it for relief
its when you tell me your sorry, you’re so sorry over and over
its when I’m so angry, but I’m so sad
its when we row and you storm to the other side of the room
its when we both look round and veer toward each other
its when we stay standing and hug and promise again never to let each other go
its when everything is fine again, because we are that strong
its when you call me a midget gem and a pumpkin and all those cute names
its when I buckle on the floor with what a wimp you are
its when I bury myself into you
its when I steal you jackets and t-shirts and run about wearing them
its when you call me cute and laugh at how big they look on me
its when you kiss me right on the top of my head, and tell me how beautiful I am
its when we part for mere hours and I clutch your jacket as if it were my lifeline
its when I stare into pictures of you, and remember how handsome you are, as if I could forget
its when we meet back up again and embrace each other in a hug with meaning
its when you know exactly how im feeling
its when I know how your feeling too
its when you know I need to be held
it when I know all you need’s a hug
its when you tell me you love me.
it’s when I tell you I love you.
And that’s when I’m in love with you.




Copyright © CommasCanSeperate ... [ 2011-01-18 15:10:42]
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Re: And Thats When.... (User Rating: 1 )
by huwbeauty on Tuesday, 18th January 2011 @ 03:26:13 PM AEST
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You obviously have a very complex relationship with your biscuits...seriously I commented on this before and still really like it there's obviously much more going on than that,You've captured the many facets of a relationship in this write, the good and the bad.
Good write,
Mat.


Re: And Thats When.... (User Rating: 1 )
by pat517 on Tuesday, 18th January 2011 @ 04:23:20 PM AEST
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very good it reminds me of good times i am happy you feel this way everyone should


Re: And Thats When.... (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Thursday, 20th January 2011 @ 01:11:41 PM AEST
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Nice and sweet. its great to notice the amazing little things that the ones we love do.




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