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A Secret Lie
Contributed by
deusdeira
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Tuesday, 18th January 2011 @ 01:33:04 PM in AEST
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A secret buried far beneath,
it makes you numb, it makes you weak,
It steals your strength, kills devotion,
succumbing allure, such primal emotion,
Resolve ebbs, a bitter lie,
it holds you back, and then you try,
to tell yourself, there's nothing there,
Denial wins, but don't despair,
The truth it needs to be un-caged,
Release the lie, release the shame.
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deusdeira
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2011-01-18 13:33:04]
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Re: A Secret Lie
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by CommasCanSeperate on
Tuesday, 18th January 2011 @ 03:18:46 PM AEST
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Its like a poem of relief.
Very nice sums up alot within a few lines x |
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Re: A Secret Lie
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by huwbeauty on
Tuesday, 18th January 2011 @ 03:34:01 PM AEST
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We tend to lie when we've done something wrong and that lie can weigh heavy upon us,so to atone and admit our mistake can be a great release,I think you got that point a across really well,great write,
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Re: A Secret Lie
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by huwbeauty on
Tuesday, 18th January 2011 @ 03:34:03 PM AEST
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We tend to lie when we've done something wrong and that lie can weigh heavy upon us,so to atone and admit our mistake can be a great release,I think you got that point a across really well,great write,
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Re: A Secret Lie
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by xHeathenx on
Tuesday, 18th January 2011 @ 04:29:10 PM AEST
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| Good topic, Good choice of words, Good poem. |
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Re: A Secret Lie
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by Daniellemarie on
Friday, 21st January 2011 @ 11:44:11 PM AEST
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it always feels so much better coming clean holding on to a lie is the worst feeling
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