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Refuge
Contributed by
posionivy
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Tuesday, 18th January 2011 @ 05:43:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Buried in dreams of you I feel I'm fighting only for refuge ,
Struggling on hand and knee toward your reality….
Life consist of shattered bits, shards too sharp to touch the tip.
your hands are made of steel so cold, the bits can now become a whole.
Being whole is so unknown that only you can console.
Used to pieces in my life but now your there to clarify.
Dreams of you cannot compare to a reality so rare.
Feelings so intertwined that the knot that binds may never rewind.
This is what I would feel for you, If love were something I could do.
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posionivy
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2011-01-18 05:43:00]
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Re: Refuge
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by RachelSixx on
Wednesday, 19th January 2011 @ 04:03:49 PM AEST
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| very beautiful, i like it. |
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Re: Refuge
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by holderofthestone on
Thursday, 20th January 2011 @ 12:56:41 PM AEST
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| "This is what I would feel for you, If love were something I could do. " this line sums it all up in such a beautiful way. Great poem! I loved it |
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