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For her
Contributed by
pat517
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Sunday, 16th January 2011 @ 09:39:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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So many days have gone by
i long for you to be mine
no other girl can compare
even try other girls, i do not dare
i keep all our memories we had
even though they make me sad
i did not mean to let you go
there is something you should know
i did not mean to hurt you
i love you, i truly do
if pain is the only way to be together
then i want pain, forever
~Patrick S. Simental~
~January 13, 2011~
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Re: For her
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by deusdeira on
Monday, 17th January 2011 @ 03:22:13 AM AEST
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| That is one of the saddest poems I've ever read. I know the feeling and this conveys it oh so well. Well done. It really is painful to be near someone you broke up with, even if you broke up for good reason. |
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Re: For her
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by huwbeauty on
Monday, 17th January 2011 @ 06:21:49 AM AEST
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| I like your style,and really understand the sentiments of this write. |
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Re: For her
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by RyanS on
Monday, 17th January 2011 @ 01:13:46 PM AEST
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| I love the last phrase in a sad sympathetic way! |
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