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One Reason
Contributed by
potentialpoet96
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Sunday, 16th January 2011 @ 04:33:45 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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i have so much to say,
but so little words.
not enough time in the world,
to say how i feel.
one moment im happy.
but the next im depressed.
following that comes indifference,
what will be next?
really there's no point,
in asking how i feel.
all for one reason,
everything changes.
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2011-01-16 16:33:45]
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Re: One Reason
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by emystar on
Sunday, 16th January 2011 @ 08:02:10 PM AEST
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Don't change a thing.
Great work of art.
Smiles,
blessings,
emy |
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Re: One Reason
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by pat517 on
Sunday, 16th January 2011 @ 09:42:22 PM AEST
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| don't change anything this is a great piece keep it the way it is |
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Re: One Reason
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by RyanS on
Monday, 17th January 2011 @ 02:13:03 PM AEST
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| the ending is the best part for me |
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