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Alone
Contributed by
RachelSixx
on
Sunday, 16th January 2011 @ 04:15:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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the darkness is coming
swallowing me
i can't think
i can't move
i can't breathe
it's too much to handle
i'm slipping away
my mind's a mess
my life is crap
just take me away from here
to a place with no pain
a place with no tears
where i can be alone
i'd rather be alone
living is too much
the longer i fight
the harder it gets
put up or give up
i think i'm giving up
just take me away from here
to a place with no pain
a place with no tears
where i can be alone
i'd rather be alone
sometimes i wish it was different
but it's not
sometimes i wish i was free
but i'm not
sometimes i wish i could fly away
but i can't
i'm trapped here
on this filthy earth
why can't you
just take me away from here
to a place with no pain
a place with no tears
where i can be alone
i'd rather be alone
but such a place
doesn't exist
Copyright ©
RachelSixx
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2011-01-16 16:15:17]
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Re: Alone
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by potentialpoet96 on
Sunday, 16th January 2011 @ 04:36:31 PM AEST
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i love it.
i feel like i can realate to this.
i am always trying to get away to a place where it's happy, and nothing bad will happen. i'm not trying to correct the ending, but such a place does exist. Heaven. Im not sure if you're the religious type, but it does exist.
anyways, i loved this. |
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Re: Alone
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by emystar on
Sunday, 16th January 2011 @ 07:57:13 PM AEST
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Really good lyrics.
One can feel the longing in these words.
Blessings,
emy
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