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The Art of Vision is to See the Invisible
Contributed by
JJAA_91
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Sunday, 16th January 2011 @ 03:00:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Out of the dark and into the light
People see me but see half of two
Easy now to be hidden behind a window
Nothing to see so you look straight through?
Your not blind, but you have a dilemma.
Out with the question or just keep it a thought?
Unwrap the obvious, before you I lay,
Reassemble me then, but its not easy to do.
Extremely complex, but shouldnt be a challenge for you.
Yet again, I'm wrong, so listen to the cries.
Easier it should get to see through my lie,
See my strife and begin to see the invisible
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Re: The Art of Vision is to See the Invisible
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by poeticjestix on
Sunday, 16th January 2011 @ 04:01:52 PM AEST
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Re: The Art of Vision is to See the Invisible
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by emystar on
Sunday, 16th January 2011 @ 07:45:23 PM AEST
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You make it sound so easy but you show with your own words.
Incredible writing.
You are highly intelligent.
I'm sure this wasn't any easy task.
good job.
blessings,
emy |
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