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Just wait and see.
Contributed by
huwbeauty
on
Friday, 14th January 2011 @ 01:31:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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As the tears well up,
Bottle them all inside,
I'm not allowed to cry,
Another whiskey,
The pain soon subsides,
A plan I've descried,
Just wait and see,
Give her the space she needs,
Because I know what she's Implied.
And my hope does soar,
Sure that she likes you,
Certain that it's true,
In time you will tell,
Just one message,
That's my presage,
Just wait and see,
It's on hope my soul feeds,
But my sanity's on the line.
Yet I feel so hollow,
As I wake to the dawn,
Malt effect has gone,
A new day arrives,
Same problems reborn,
Will I remain forlorn,
Just wait and see,
'cause you have what she needs,
Everything that you've been denied.
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huwbeauty
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2011-01-14 01:31:24]
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Re: Just wait and see.
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by xHeathenx on
Friday, 14th January 2011 @ 01:37:13 AM AEST
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| I wonder if you meant everything that "she's" been denied. Would seem to be more fitting, but if it weren't than something in this poem is being said that I can't manage to know. |
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Re: Just wait and see.
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by cashfan1 on
Saturday, 15th January 2011 @ 05:35:15 AM AEST
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| Unlike the last comment, I can see where this is coming from. As always very well executed piece of writing, very strong in content as are all your poems. Well done. |
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