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When you were mine.
Contributed by
huwbeauty
on
Friday, 14th January 2011 @ 12:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I still see you,
You walk down that hill,
The smile you supplied,
Almost breaks my will,
I still hear your,
Your joyous laughter,
Hope you supplied,
Constrained rapture,
I still feel your,
Your tender caress,
Goosebumps supplied,
Must shed this flesh,
I still think of,
Of our perfect night,
Love you supplied,
When all was right,
When you were mine.
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2011-01-14 00:45:00]
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Re: When you were mine.
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by xHeathenx on
Friday, 14th January 2011 @ 01:12:54 AM AEST
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Best part of it, is that neither is it explicitly regretful, or remorseful. It just explicitly remembers, and appreciates what one had.
Easy to relate too. |
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Re: When you were mine.
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by cashfan1 on
Saturday, 15th January 2011 @ 05:39:29 AM AEST
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| Wonderful writing. Free flowing, deeply moving and memory evoking. Thanks for posting. |
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