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Thought Cloud
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Thursday, 13th January 2011 @ 09:41:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Cloud of nothingness,
unborn thought awaiting life
ideas downpour
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
... [
2011-01-13 21:41:57]
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Re: Thought Cloud
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by Ambivalence on
Friday, 14th January 2011 @ 12:07:43 AM AEST
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nice...a great metaphor to the inspiration of poetry. I really like the last line.
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Re: Thought Cloud
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by cashfan1 on
Saturday, 15th January 2011 @ 05:41:17 AM AEST
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| Lovely writing, intense and to the point. I love it. Well done. |
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Re: Thought Cloud
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by Datimeisme on
Wednesday, 26th January 2011 @ 07:35:25 PM AEST
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| I very good haiku, but isent "Ideas Downpour" only 4 Syllables?maybe im wrong, either way great poem |
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Re: Thought Cloud
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by windowguy on
Friday, 26th August 2011 @ 01:30:39 PM AEST
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Aah, the cartoon bubble above the head.
Much better description here. Great. |
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