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Am not PerFect
Contributed by
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
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Thursday, 13th January 2011 @ 12:46:53 PM in AEST
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To be perfect is a gift.
so please take me of your reading list.
cause am not good at all of this
mistake will be made i'm told this
i will make correction a i wish
.so excuse my misspelling and grammacal errors
am still learning to be perfect felles.
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RICHARD_CAMPBELL
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2011-01-13 12:46:53]
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Re: Am not PerFect
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by emystar on
Thursday, 13th January 2011 @ 12:58:44 PM AEST
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Not me. You want catch me trying to be perfect, friend. God didn't expect us to be perfect.
You want catch me even trying to be normal either.
Normal is a big statement and ain't for me.
Keep writing, friend and I'll still be here ;istening.
Smiles, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Am not PerFect
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by RyanS on
Thursday, 13th January 2011 @ 02:18:50 PM AEST
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| HA! I like it! You had me for a second, very nice. |
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Re: Am not PerFect
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by Ambivalence on
Friday, 14th January 2011 @ 12:15:34 AM AEST
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Very cool, haven't seen an unconventional (and even original) poem like this in a while.
It's really refreshing :]
take care
-K.Z. |
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Re: Am not PerFect
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by huwbeauty on
Friday, 14th January 2011 @ 02:06:08 AM AEST
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| Clever write this,well thought out. |
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Re: Am not PerFect
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by Banjosandwitch on
Friday, 14th January 2011 @ 04:50:47 AM AEST
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| use capitals but - I - still like |
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