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Unknown Symphony
Contributed by
RyanS
on
Wednesday, 12th January 2011 @ 06:03:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Anytime
I hear any chime
Emanating from my phone
Im in a trance
While my ears dance
Everything disappears and Im obliviously all alone
Just the thought
That it could be you who you sought
Makes me feel like a king atop my throne
Feelings of hope and delight
So warm I could ignite
In a dream that will never be outgrown
So much rapture and bliss
Hoping your voice will give my consciousness a kiss
I would give anything to stay in that zone
A whirlwind of emotions
Inside a heart that could fill oceans
All from the unknown symphony emanating from my phone
Copyright ©
RyanS
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2011-01-12 18:03:30]
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Re: Unknown Symphony
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th January 2011 @ 06:35:11 PM AEST
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| Excellent poem I liked it alot. could be tuned some but an good first post welcome to the site hope to see more from ya |
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Re: Unknown Symphony
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by unknown_utopia on
Wednesday, 12th January 2011 @ 10:05:54 PM AEST
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I like the topic
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I like the flow.....
well done. |
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Re: Unknown Symphony
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Thursday, 13th January 2011 @ 01:17:33 PM AEST
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wow!
what a pice of art very good. |
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Re: Unknown Symphony
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by Ambivalence on
Sunday, 16th January 2011 @ 09:01:50 PM AEST
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The best part I think:
"A whirlwind of emotions
Inside a heart that could fill oceans"
That was pretty ingenious!
take care
-K.Z. |
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