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Lonliness
Contributed by
pat517
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Monday, 10th January 2011 @ 10:19:49 PM in AEST
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Lonliness
That feeling of being empty, hopeless
That feeling of being alone, heartless
Surrounded by those who say they care
How can they help, when they just were not there
Who knew one person could make me see
The monster i had come to be
Pain and sorrow, my favorite feast
It was the true story of beauty and the beast
Only she couldn't handle the transfiguration
Into the new congregation
I know no one anymore
The emotional pain, taking its toll
Knives cutting away at my soul
Keeping feelings concealed
The wounds never healed
Bleeding internally.
Bleeding eternally.
-Patrick S. Simental-
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Re: Lonliness
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 12th January 2011 @ 01:02:15 AM AEST
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Very sad but really good writing.
Welcome to YPDC.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Lonliness
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by jennguy41 on
Monday, 26th September 2011 @ 11:20:22 PM AEST
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| i hope you havent' experienced this pain at your age, but it was well written keep writing. |
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