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silver dream
Contributed by
wazarov
on
Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 09:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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My beloved friends
I want some of your attention
do I have to surrender
I’m her slave and feeling brave
I can’t bare the way she stare
and I can’t stay so far away from her
can I stare to the sun
she doesn’t realize that I’m a ring
in her finger like a king
from time to time , to her heart I sing
blasphemous or famous
some hearts are just genius
while others are suspicious
I know, love is unbearable
but my heart is capable
my beloved friends, are still able
to hear the story of my tears and my fables
cause I’m lonely and a recluse inside her
I still feel guilty for killing her
she hold me tight
and I couldn’t fight
while the demon inside still wants a bite.
Copyright ©
wazarov
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2003-04-22 21:35:00]
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Re: silver dream
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by AngryPrincess on
Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 11:18:18 PM AEST
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wow dean that was amazing... *sigh*
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Re: silver dream
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 12:56:01 AM AEST
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well done
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Re: silver dream
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 01:00:14 AM AEST
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Nice write, Dean...
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Re: silver dream
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by karoody on
Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 01:33:53 AM AEST
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a great write...moving...
hugs
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Re: silver dream
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by cryingonmyporch on
Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 07:33:13 PM AEST
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beautiful!
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