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Until The End
Contributed by
DoubleS
on
Monday, 10th January 2011 @ 03:40:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I sit in this world
Half asleep, Half awake
As time seems to fade
And my world starts to quake
I haven't slept a day
Since you left my life
I seem to forget
What is wrong, what is right
I can't even walk
And I'm just not the same
When you walked out the door
It drove me insane
I still have these dreams
And thoughts of when we grow old
The memories we'll have
And the stories we'll have told
But do you understand
It's hard to love another
Cause after loving you
I couldn't love another
Cause you're the one for me
I know it and I've felt it
And when you broke my heart
I just couldn't repair it
The pain was big and clear
There was no was no way to stop it
Its been a month since I
Have started to feel it
But now I know there's one way
To fix a broken heart
But it won't ever happen
So where should I start
I'll start with I still love you
And that will never change
No matter the distance
No matter how far away
So now we are done
So now we're just friends
But I will always love you
Until the very end
Copyright ©
DoubleS
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2011-01-10 15:40:59]
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Re: Until The End
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by emystar on
Monday, 10th January 2011 @ 04:59:21 PM AEST
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Very good writing.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: Until The End
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by Breezy on
Monday, 10th January 2011 @ 05:38:37 PM AEST
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Endings are almost always sad, even when it is the right thing.
But when it also feels wrong, it is almost unbearable.
There is tremendous sadness in this...
~ Breezy
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Re: Until The End
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by euphoema on
Wednesday, 19th January 2011 @ 11:28:58 AM AEST
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| very creative |
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