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Acts of passion
Contributed by
Darbi
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Monday, 10th January 2011 @ 02:32:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
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does it hurt you to see me so alone
or do you even care that I've been gone
my mind has been lost for far to long
maybe I'm losing you
so what should i do
i cant help but smile when you frown
or kick you when your down
i cant help the pleasure i get from you
it may be twisted but only truth
so i just want to lay right next to you
and watch you squirm
soon you will learn that I'm no good for you
i don't believe the tables could turn
but if it should make it good
because i won't care if i don't rise
your pain is just too nice
Copyright ©
Darbi
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2011-01-10 14:32:34]
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Re: Acts of passion
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by Breezy on
Monday, 10th January 2011 @ 05:48:47 PM AEST
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Indeed, dark. I think something though, that a lot feel.
How nice it is to place it into words. Sometimes a darkness
can take hold and turn even the most passive heart
into a black need for leveling the playing field.
Interesting post. Most thought provoking.
~ Breezy
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Re: Acts of passion
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by euphoema on
Wednesday, 19th January 2011 @ 11:27:14 AM AEST
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| thats right on point. |
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