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Sorrow
Contributed by
Anoo
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Monday, 10th January 2011 @ 06:51:33 AM in AEST
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SadPoetry
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Sorrow
My eyes have never wept so much,
as on the day,
when they saw you walk away.
Tears as warm as blood,
trickled in a stream of sorrow,
blurring your gentle image
into past...
Copyright ©
Anoo
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2011-01-10 06:51:33]
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Re: Sorrow
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by emystar on
Monday, 10th January 2011 @ 07:46:37 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
This write is heart wrenching but awesome writing.
It comes to life on it's own and most of us can relate.
blessings, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Sorrow
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by shanat on
Monday, 10th January 2011 @ 09:20:16 AM AEST
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| i felt the tears as tears are ment to be, great strong write:) |
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Re: Sorrow
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by Breezy on
Monday, 10th January 2011 @ 05:51:21 PM AEST
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There is a lingering pain that you captured in this.
Especially the last two lines. Heart wrenching.
~ Breezy |
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Re: Sorrow
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by northernlights on
Tuesday, 11th January 2011 @ 02:48:44 AM AEST
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| Tears as warm as blood trickled in a stream of sorrow now thats a beautiful line, lovely expression in this esp the last four lines well written |
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