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Blind Bliss
Contributed by
Darbi
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Sunday, 9th January 2011 @ 09:30:07 PM in AEST
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i stand still and silent facing the mirror
the image is cold and oh so clear
i take a step back but the image gets nearer
fear has taken over ive no control left
never have i looked so hard in those eyes
so distant and yet so familiar
so hopeful and so vexed
ive tumbled down the rabbit hole
but the wind just feels so great on my legs
who have i become
something better the the mirrors
i had looked in before then
no safety
no control
i want to coninue tumbling down this rabbit hole
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Darbi
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2011-01-09 21:30:07]
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Re: Blind Bliss
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by scottstone on
Monday, 10th January 2011 @ 01:38:26 AM AEST
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| nicely written |
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Re: Blind Bliss
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by OnceAnAngel on
Monday, 10th January 2011 @ 09:47:55 AM AEST
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| until it swallows you whole? be careful. |
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Re: Blind Bliss
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by emystar on
Monday, 10th January 2011 @ 10:46:41 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC>
good luck on that rabbit hole.
Smiles,
emy
Great writing.
Luv your sense of humor. |
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Re: Blind Bliss
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by Ambivalence on
Monday, 10th January 2011 @ 05:25:43 PM AEST
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i know exactly what you mean here...probably too late and too deep to dig ourselves out. great write
take care
-K.Z. |
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Re: Blind Bliss
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by slackoffsamiam on
Tuesday, 11th January 2011 @ 10:42:47 PM AEST
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| If we lived in a world that made no sense I would absolutely hate this poem, but seeing as this isn't so, I must conceid to the contrary. |
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Re: Blind Bliss
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by JJAA_91 on
Sunday, 16th January 2011 @ 03:07:15 PM AEST
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| very nice write with good imagery. well done |
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