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A Different Kind of Love Story
Contributed by
MichaelM93
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Sunday, 9th January 2011 @ 02:28:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Going through school misunderstood
Everyone thinking I was an idiot
Just because my anguish showed
The marks were evident
Everyone could see them
There were times when I had a friend
Most of them only lasted a few weeks
They were only trying to screw with me
Even so
The interaction felt great
Surely it seems weird
Taking abuse with a smile
Because it's all I got
But when you have nothing
You learn to take anything
No matter how great the pain
I endured it
Then he showed up
A man so perfect he'd never look twice at me
But then he glanced thrice
Later we saw each other
He glanced and saw my wrists
He smiled and took his watch off
He glanced down
And followed it with a kiss
I now have something more
Someone to love
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MichaelM93
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2011-01-09 14:28:15]
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Re: A Different Kind of Love Story
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by emystar on
Monday, 10th January 2011 @ 10:10:16 AM AEST
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Great writing.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: A Different Kind of Love Story
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th January 2011 @ 11:05:13 PM AEST
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| Taking abuse with a smile sounds like my life. Very good poem found myself thinking back to my high school days. awsome writing. Last stanza made me think alot cause I always think there has to be a reason for everything, like what was he helping to cover on your wrist. just me over thinking |
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Re: A Different Kind of Love Story
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by deusdeira on
Friday, 21st January 2011 @ 11:37:31 AM AEST
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| Life can be cruel. I'm glad you found a lover, but remember, love does not always last forever. Try to make yourself happy without any help. Maybe get a job and establish a new reputation. A bad rep is hard to break, and not worth the effort usually. |
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