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My Best Friend
Contributed by
MichaelM93
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Saturday, 8th January 2011 @ 10:28:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Starting every day with a call
An hour or more
A movie every week
At home if we were broke
No matter what we together
You were my friend for life
All through school we were best friends
Telling each other everything
Even what God didn't know
An undying trust
Then the Summer came
School was over
And apparently we were too
Finding you with him
The images branded in my back
The words engraved in my soul
Never to trust again
Copyright ©
MichaelM93
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2011-01-08 22:28:11]
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Re: My Best Friend
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by xHeathenx on
Sunday, 9th January 2011 @ 02:42:14 AM AEST
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The line
"Finding you with him"
and
"Never to trust again"
Make it seem more than best friends if you get my gist. So maybe the title doesn't do that justice, or it's a personal experience one has to feel and understand. |
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Re: My Best Friend
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Sunday, 9th January 2011 @ 11:00:28 AM AEST
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| THIS A VERY GOOD POEM FULL WITH TRUE EMOTION. |
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Re: My Best Friend
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by iiloveyouxx19 on
Sunday, 9th January 2011 @ 04:54:19 PM AEST
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| very nice write. Its hard to cope with loosing your bestfriend so im glad you took it upon yourself to write this. Its hard to comply a situation like that, but you did a good job, |
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