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Lost
Contributed by
kevin
on
Saturday, 8th January 2011 @ 07:35:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Alone I stride along the crimson tide
The shadow of a living soul
A life in distress, now I regress
I know I’ve lost control
No more hate, no more pain, nothing more to lose
From this life of misery my sentence I refuse
Now cast aside I will not abide
The shame of it all
For you will see my judgment of thee
Our sins of life enthralled
No more can you take as I have nothing to give
What I’d do to go back… A chance to relive
For pain to cease and me to release
I beg you to withdraw
Life misplaced from God’s grace
And now held in Satan’s claw
It’s now over for me, my chosen time to die
But in the flames you shall burn, an eternity to lie
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kevin
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2011-01-08 19:35:57]
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Re: Lost
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by xHeathenx on
Sunday, 9th January 2011 @ 02:18:43 AM AEST
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Oh, maybe I'm wrong, but I'm seeing it as purgatory, yet the one whom he's speaking to must be a wrongdoer to him, and he knows they're going to stay in hell, or believes it at least.
Interesting read, and well written too.
Good vocabulary as well as imagery. |
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Re: Lost
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by Darbi on
Wednesday, 12th January 2011 @ 12:00:10 AM AEST
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| Very good read. First thing that came to my mind reading this though was suicide.. Life itself had become the purgatory. |
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