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Insight(less)
Contributed by
jmaioho
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Saturday, 8th January 2011 @ 02:28:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Mind, a bit slower.
Insights, less acute.
I know I know a fraction less than yester-day.
Yet, people understand, better, no, acknowledge... knowingly, bit by bit, slower day, by slower day.
Lending weight to utterances, reflections that baffle the younger, faster, more omniscient me.
They perceive an amorphication of somebody that, they believe ,should know.....
Not because they hear it with ears, decipher it with mind or feel it with heart.....
They greedily inhale the effusions ,hope in them, cling to them, make them their own... because...
They see the wrinkles, the weathering, the eyes, of someone who has beaten a storm.
They clamor to know…without that themselves weighing anchor.
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jmaioho
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2011-01-08 14:28:26]
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Re: Insight(less)
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by emystar on
Saturday, 8th January 2011 @ 03:01:56 PM AEST
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Welcome to Ypdc.
I really like your work.
Great writing.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: Insight(less)
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by xHeathenx on
Sunday, 9th January 2011 @ 02:46:45 AM AEST
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| Well, this is quite deep, well written, with a good vocabulary, and i enjoy the repetition in the lines with "bit by bit" and "slower day, by slower day". |
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