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YOU SHO???
Contributed by
emystar
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Saturday, 8th January 2011 @ 09:27:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
didactic
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You sho don't look like
a boy to me.
Know you're alive little boy
ouiiiiieeeeeeiii.
Tell me what luv is,
wonna see.
Are you sho you think
you luv me?
How will we ever know?
Gonna get cold tonight,
Even might even snow.
repeat..
No matter what comes along
Time is motionless with out you.
You're running free
in the sunshine.
Come heat the world
Round here, see?
Vibrations tremble inside
Whoop ei.
Was you the one God made? So
We could hold each other up.
Is this what, creations laid?
Gotta always be aware
of heaven
Paved with angels every where.
To keep luv strong, free.
Rolling on here and over there.
Copyright ©
emystar
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2011-01-08 09:27:53]
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Re: YOU SHO???
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by xHeathenx on
Sunday, 9th January 2011 @ 02:55:15 AM AEST
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| I don't quite get it, but the way you spell some of the words out, and with what you wrote as a description I was expecting some sort of gangster thing, straight out of the 'pen'itentiary. |
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Re: YOU SHO???
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Sunday, 9th January 2011 @ 11:08:11 AM AEST
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| AFTER ALL THESE YEARS YOU HAVEN'T LOS A THING.WELL DONE MY FRIEND. |
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Re: YOU SHO???
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by Dirkj on
Sunday, 9th January 2011 @ 11:49:56 PM AEST
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| LOVE IT |
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Re: YOU SHO???
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by Breezy on
Monday, 10th January 2011 @ 06:36:39 PM AEST
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Hey emy :)
Beautiful last stanza. As always, your work is filled
with much emotion. Lovely to read.
~ Breezy
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Re: YOU SHO???
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by Banjosandwitch on
Tuesday, 8th February 2011 @ 07:51:44 AM AEST
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| shizzle forizzle nice |
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Re: YOU SHO???
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 18th March 2011 @ 03:30:49 PM AEST
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I could picture you sitting by the fire just reciting this one as if you were chatting to friends.
Quirky and interesting.
Steve |
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Re: YOU SHO???
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by UNORTHODOX on
Saturday, 2nd April 2011 @ 11:41:28 PM AEST
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What I loved most about this piece,
was it's unpolished quality
it was witty,clever, and brought a smile to my face
it's interesting to think how our minds think
before we start thinking for it
well done ,a breath of fresh air
-UNORTHODOX |
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Re: YOU SHO???
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by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 16th April 2011 @ 09:12:02 AM AEST
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You sho you ain't an angel
cause
I'm sho you are......yes. |
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Re: YOU SHO???
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Tuesday, 19th April 2011 @ 11:00:12 AM AEST
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The last commentor got it right.
Me too - am shoo we deal with an angel here. A very delightful and unique type of angerl, that can not but delight the earthy individual comforted by the angel's warmth
love and faithfulness. woopie !
Enjoyed greatly
Blessed and joyous Easter! sweet Emystar angel
Elizabeth |
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Re: YOU SHO???
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by Ramfire on
Monday, 13th June 2011 @ 08:31:57 PM AEST
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| Gotta go with the vibrations. They're right every time. |
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Re: YOU SHO???
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by Lionel on
Monday, 4th July 2011 @ 11:18:05 PM AEST
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| Very unusual, and witty poem. I like it. |
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