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Depressions Vampyr
Contributed by
wyrd_faerie
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Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 07:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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She’s a beautiful stranger in black standing in the rain, devoid of pain
She roams the streets at night and she calls your name
Takes you home and fills your head with her playful lies
Lets you sip on her poison as she undresses you with her eyes
She’ll lie you down, wrap her arms around you and whisper promises to your mouth
Handcuff you to her black bed and take your innocence to hear you shout.
Wilted roses fall from her lips and the thorns sting your kiss
Her mind shines through her eyes to entice you into her bliss
You’re a slave to her pretty games and twisted lies
Her heavy eyes are closed as she feeds off your cries
She’ll whip you, leave you bleeding but begging for more
She’ll chew you, use you, leave you broken and sore.
Her shadow dances around the room, your bodies entwined
Newspaper pictures lost in time lie frozen in your mind.
Scars on her body, proof of all the angels she’s taken before
Locked under her spell and made into her whore
You’re a prisoner to her painful kisses,
You’re a slave to her vampyr wishes.
Bound to her, covered in chains and black leather ropes
Your mind lies lost and forgotten as she takes all your hopes.
Addicted to her body, addicted to the smell of her skin,
She opens her endless eyes and draws you in
She’ll tie you up, overpower you and lick your wounded face
As you lie, weak and willing in her velvet embrace,
She’ll take a drag of your suicide branded cigarette and stub it out on your skin
As her blackened eyes open your mind, and the pain falls in…
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Re: Depressions Vampyr
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by lilch4ever on
Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 07:53:54 PM AEST
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| WOW what a mind blower. I really don't know what to say. Nicely written I have to say. |
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Re: Depressions Vampyr
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by Jilli_bean on
Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 08:34:33 PM AEST
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| good. job...i like ...not that my opion really matters...in the end, you decide...but i like what i read...the description is tremendously well written...and on one of my fave subjects...(i have a lot) : ) |
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Re: Depressions Vampyr
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 01:35:52 AM AEST
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oh my wow!! This is incredible!! Im captivated for sure!! WOW!!
michelle |
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Re: Depressions Vampyr
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 02:28:22 PM AEST
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As I said before this was one of the best of your many awesome poems you have written. All the lines in this poem are strong and simply mind blowing. I'm glad u posted this. Take care of yerself.
Love you,
Joel |
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Re: Depressions Vampyr
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by M on
Saturday, 26th April 2003 @ 07:18:42 AM AEST
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| Baby, this is definately one of your best poems. its really powerful. wow. xXx |
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Re: Depressions Vampyr
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by razorbladerose on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 08:14:15 AM AEST
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| OMG! You are so good at descriptiveness! The imagery i got from this write is incredible. You have a natural talent...you got my attention! |
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Re: Depressions Vampyr
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by cheetham on
Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 07:47:54 PM AEST
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| this is honestly one of the best poems I've read in a long, long time... and thats including published ones! technically, its awesome... great use of imagery and metaphors... and the general theme is well approached.. Great poem!!! keep it up! |
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Re: Depressions Vampyr
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 04:34:35 PM AEST
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| an excellent write, i was totally drawn within' and i simply love it:) hugs nessa |
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Re: Depressions Vampyr
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by etherealgurl on
Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 05:55:29 PM AEST
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| holy wow! Your use of extended metaphore in this is consistantly mind blowing throughout the poem....I was completely entranced reading it and feel I could read it over and over again and find no boredom in the repitition. As I too suffer from depression, I can relate to every word....it is incredible that you are able to express something so ugly w/ such beauty and finess..... I must say you are exceptionally talented! I can't wait to read more of your work.... |
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Re: Depressions Vampyr
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by Saira on
Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 05:24:13 PM AEST
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| It's absolutely wonderful!!! I am just falling short of words as to describe how beautifully you have created the scenario in your well written poem. While reading, I was really lost in it. Gooooood Work! |
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Re: Depressions Vampyr
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by wild_heart_of_fire on
Friday, 27th June 2003 @ 04:51:31 PM AEST
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captivating. simply brilliant. yet another awe inspiring poem. you leave me stunned every time. encore! encore! may you have bright and sunny days from now until forever ends.
Always,
~*riki lynn*~ |
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