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Desert Journey
Contributed by
benjaminbenjamin
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Saturday, 8th January 2011 @ 07:57:43 AM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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Desert Journey
Take your place in the sand,
we are all there,
how will this end?
Each will get a share.
Only the sun knows the heat of the sand.
Let the wind lead your way,
you are nothing but the dust,
you will soon become prey,
so that you'll be lost.
Only the wind knows the hidden land.
Listen to the rain,
each drop is a seed,
flower not in vain,
let it lead, let it lead.
Only the rain wets the palm of your hand.
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2011-01-08 07:57:43]
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Re: Desert Journey
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by emystar on
Saturday, 8th January 2011 @ 08:20:21 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Really good writing.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: Desert Journey
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by Voyager on
Saturday, 8th January 2011 @ 09:54:35 AM AEST
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Wow! great poem first up! The start is so powerful and humbling. We all need to take our places indeed.Everyone plays their part eh?
Through and through the poem has a humbling effect when it says "we are nothing but dust. Shows our insignificane in comparison to the universal existence. yet we give so much importance to our personal egos. Good write, keep it up. |
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